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It's an exciting feeling, the momentum of "something is going on." I think this first poem, "Yeah," is one of those elegant examples of a poem bending language and using sound to generate meaning in a way that is completely yours and your voice (I realize it's after Ted Berrigan, but it's still yours). I had to look up this quote from "The Triggering Town" because it says it better than me:

"So you are after those words you can own and ways of putting them in phrases and lines that are yours by right of obsessive musical deed."

I think you've done that well here. Plus it's so playful!

I could go on about all of these poems, but that would be a lot of words in a small comment box. I realize I'm coming to this post a few months late, but I hope the momentum and things going on keep going on.

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