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"One can't help falling in love with fractures, / the shifting face of disaster."

I love in the notes that you got lost in the writing of this poem. Often, those are the best poems, when both writer and reader follow something that is both intuitive and intentional. Beautiful

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Thanks so much for reading, Rachel!!

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Of course. That's what we're here for, right? PS: I had to learn what substack was to subscribe to you. Pretty sure I understand now. Perhaps don't understand the nuance between blog/substack/ other things. Keep writing- I love the notes at the end. Had never known about Green Man. I sincerely believe that the more we interact with poetry the more we expand, grow. Thank you for introducing me, RM! No clue how we met. Very glad we did. I love this educational format and I love serialized poems.

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